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Permalink | Quote | PM | +Rep by mastadoom » June 29, 2014 11:46pm | Report
http://dotabuff.com/matches/749641535

I played mirana this game and I want to know how i can improve. This is a game I played recently and I want to know how I can improve.

All advise is nice.
tiny:
http://www.dotafire.com/dota-2/guide/rock-and-roll-9867

templar assassin:
http://www.dotafire.com/dota-2/guide/mysteries-of-the-assassin-8116

Crystal maiden:
http://www.dotafire.com/dota-2/guide/cold-as-your-heart-8079

Earthshaker:
http://www.dotafire.com/dota-2/guide/the-earth-trembles-8212
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Permalink | Quote | PM | +Rep by Treutreu » June 30, 2014 12:32am | Report
Not sure about that Ethereal Blade choice, it doesn't really fit mirana, she lacks magic burst. Or was it to combo with Tinker? If not the case, a Butterfly would have been much better for both dps and survivability, especially since you have Manta Style and Mjollnir, which boost your right clicks, and you cant right click an enemy if he is in ethereal form.
I'll tell you more about your plays if I find time to watch the replay.
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Permalink | Quote | PM | +Rep by mastadoom » June 30, 2014 2:15am | Report
Treutreu wrote:

Not sure about that Ethereal Blade choice, it doesn't really fit mirana, she lacks magic burst. Or was it to combo with Tinker? If not the case, a Butterfly would have been much better for both dps and survivability, especially since you have Manta Style and Mjollnir, which boost your right clicks, and you cant right click an enemy if he is in ethereal form.
I'll tell you more about your plays if I find time to watch the replay.


I got the e-blade because we had already won at the point i got it (I was going to get a butterfly) we were taking their second rax when i said screw it.
tiny:
http://www.dotafire.com/dota-2/guide/rock-and-roll-9867

templar assassin:
http://www.dotafire.com/dota-2/guide/mysteries-of-the-assassin-8116

Crystal maiden:
http://www.dotafire.com/dota-2/guide/cold-as-your-heart-8079

Earthshaker:
http://www.dotafire.com/dota-2/guide/the-earth-trembles-8212
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Permalink | Quote | PM | +Rep by FleetAU » June 30, 2014 3:35am | Report
really mad, if you want us to evaluate a game where you did something wrong show us a game you didn't do well in, a game that you lost. Because quite frankly this was a stomp, you where ahead of them in kills and gold for the entire game, there was literally not a single moment where they where ahead of you.

I shall find all your mirana games and evaluate them...not this one: http://dotabuff.com/players/83940200/matches?date=&faction=&hero=mirana&lobby_type=&game_mode=&region=&duration=

and really, these where just a bunch of low level un-ranked players, they got ****ing destroyed
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Permalink | Quote | PM | +Rep by mastadoom » June 30, 2014 3:46am | Report
FleetAU wrote:

really mad, if you want us to evaluate a game where you did something wrong show us a game you didn't do well in, a game that you lost. Because quite frankly this was a stomp, you where ahead of them in kills and gold for the entire game, there was literally not a single moment where they where ahead of you.

I shall find all your mirana games and evaluate them...not this one: http://dotabuff.com/players/83940200/matches?date=&faction=&hero=mirana&lobby_type=&game_mode=&region=&duration=

and really, these where just a bunch of low level un-ranked players, they got ****ing destroyed


I just want to know what I could have done better man, I know this was s a stomp, but I still don't think im all that good at mirana, and I want to know what you guys thing i did wrong (and this was the only game I had that could be viewed)
tiny:
http://www.dotafire.com/dota-2/guide/rock-and-roll-9867

templar assassin:
http://www.dotafire.com/dota-2/guide/mysteries-of-the-assassin-8116

Crystal maiden:
http://www.dotafire.com/dota-2/guide/cold-as-your-heart-8079

Earthshaker:
http://www.dotafire.com/dota-2/guide/the-earth-trembles-8212
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Permalink | Quote | PM | +Rep by jawbreaker261 » June 30, 2014 9:13am | Report
Just from the dotabuff I would say:
Ethereal Blade is almost never a good item on Mirana
Perseverence is a 3x more expensive version of Bottle, and you don't need anything it builds into.
Manta Style isn't amazing either, if you really want to buy it the rest of your itembuild should be focused on stats, which yours was not.
Either you or LD should have gone Assault Cuirass instead of two Mjollnirs and no armor aura against a Void+WD.
160 lasthits for what appears to be a carry build is a lot less than you could have gotten in 38 minutes.

Will probably have time to look at replay later today (at work now).

Disagree 100% with fleet's point, the only difference between this and an even game from a reviewing POV is that the mistakes here make the game take 10min longer rather than changing who wins.
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Permalink | Quote | PM | +Rep by sulaxrox » June 30, 2014 10:10am | Report
jawbreaker261 wrote:

Just from the dotabuff I would say:
Ethereal Blade is almost never a good item on Mirana
Perseverence is a 3x more expensive version of Bottle, and you don't need anything it builds into.
Manta Style isn't amazing either, if you really want to buy it the rest of your itembuild should be focused on stats, which yours was not.
Either you or LD should have gone Assault Cuirass instead of two Mjollnirs and no armor aura against a Void+WD.
160 lasthits for what appears to be a carry build is a lot less than you could have gotten in 38 minutes.

Will probably have time to look at replay later today (at work now).

Disagree 100% with fleet's point, the only difference between this and an even game from a reviewing POV is that the mistakes here make the game take 10min longer rather than changing who wins.

Manta Style had its uses in this game, purging Psionic Trap debuff, and dodging Viper Strike inflating his movement speed, survivability and dps, although reading this I don't feel like he had that in mind. Looks like the perseverance was random as hell, linkens planned possibly? Hmm, eblade I read your reason for that, just go butterfly even when screwing off, amazing Potm item. With Mirana you go utility, glass cannon, or stats, but realize she's flexible as hell, and can perform outstanding with a plethora of items.
Read up and familiarize yourself with what manta purges, generally you can't go wrong opening up with phase, Aquila, drums..but if you go mjolinir after drums, go all in, get more dps, manta is a soft damage increase vs butterfly or desolater.
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Step 2: type in all chat:"GL hf"
Step 3: solo offlane
Step 4: first blood triple kill solo vs trilane
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Permalink | Quote | PM | +Rep by jawbreaker261 » June 30, 2014 1:06pm | Report
I know exactly what manta purges. I also didn't say it was bad, I said it doesn't fit when you're spending most of your money on items that don't give stats (phase and mjollnir). If you want to go manta you should be preceding it with stuff like treads and drum. If you're buying it for the evasion and purge, BKB does a better job for less money.
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Permalink | Quote | PM | +Rep by Xyrus » June 30, 2014 2:25pm | Report
I sorta agree with Fleet here, stomping makes it hard to tell the difference between you messing around and you doing poorly. Try a game where you're not sure what you could have done any better.
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Permalink | Quote | PM | +Rep by mastadoom » June 30, 2014 4:58pm | Report
Xyrus wrote:

I sorta agree with Fleet here, stomping makes it hard to tell the difference between you messing around and you doing poorly. Try a game where you're not sure what you could have done any better.



OK, just for you mustache man. next game that I don't do so well in I will post here and ask for help.
tiny:
http://www.dotafire.com/dota-2/guide/rock-and-roll-9867

templar assassin:
http://www.dotafire.com/dota-2/guide/mysteries-of-the-assassin-8116

Crystal maiden:
http://www.dotafire.com/dota-2/guide/cold-as-your-heart-8079

Earthshaker:
http://www.dotafire.com/dota-2/guide/the-earth-trembles-8212
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