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And good luck on completing your guide
1. Not in depth
2. No explanations
3. NO EXPLANATIONS WHATSOEVER
4. barely 5000 words
5. Contains no actual content, just a list of items and explanation of skills.
Basically, this is my
It covers all of the Items in depth, gives reasons, gives Friends/Foes/Food, explains the skill in depth, explains what to get when, explains what heroes certain Items are good against, how to make builds efficient, emphasizes
In other words, I made the same build as you did. I just put thought and effort into it. I worked for perhaps 72 hours on that guide. You probably spent 2 or less. To improve the guide, put time and effort into it, do a little math on which Items are best, and string efficient Items together into builds. That is how you make a build. Then, you EXPLAIN. 95% of the people that read these guides are "noobs" trying to get better. They cant do that if there are no explanations. They need to learn how to make their own decisions and develop a playstyle.
Believe it or not, to me, dota is art. Spending only 2 or less hours on a painting is not okay.
Then again, it isn't your fault. I criticize hard, but my first guide SUCKED. Keep playing, keep getting better, and you will find all of the sudden that you know how to string together items into builds.
A few things to help:
1. Armor and Magic resistance are only truly useful if you have high HP to begin with.
2. Attack damage is inefficient without attack speed, and vice-versa. (unless you are talking about something like
3. If you already have lots of burst, making armor or magic reduction items is way better than buying a Dagon.
4. Instead of stacking percentage based mana regen items to the max, some intelligence can make what you already have way more efficient.
This fixes a lot of item inefficiencies.
Thanks for your time.
Right now I like your items and skills, and would just suggest the following:
- Why not a
- Add items explanations and friends and foes
- I think that, in certain cases, for instance when you don't have any reliable disable in your team at level 1 to help you position that
Anyway, I like what you have in your guide so far!