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Permalink | Quote | PM | +Rep by Smuggels » June 24, 2015 2:07am | Report

WINNERS BRACKET



Okay then :) congratulations for winning your groups in the group stages WELL DONE! :D



This is the winners bracket the top 2 in this bracket will go into the finals and a chance to win a Golden Moonfall Shield and a Immortal Treasure III and a number of other prizes!!! including the "Super Secret Special" prize. In this bracket you will be asked to submit an idea. the idea will be based upon your choice of theme. i will supply THREE themes and you can choose to adhere to any of them. Your Submissions will be judged by the three judges. the finals will consist of the top two here and the top 2 in the losers bracket. GLHF

this bracket consists of:

Pro_in_progamer
BKvoiceover
Yzreel
TheSofa
Poyrgon

THEMES



Re-imagine a current hero with only the name and stats remaining.

Create a Hero without any "Magic" (this can either be skills that arent "magical in nature" like Bristleback skills that are only "physical" or skills that originate from science like tinker clockwerk timbersaw

Create a hero that is a "partner" of heroes (i.e. Io, or if you will "a hero that requires other heroes to be useful)

GLHF!

DEADLINE:

08/07/2015

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Permalink | Quote | PM | +Rep by Yzreel » June 24, 2015 6:11am | Report
Great job, guys!
Looking forward to a great competition!

Questions:
–The deadline?
–If one were to choose to re-imagine a hero, does he also have to change the lore then? (In this case, can he also use the lore they made in the previous FoC?)
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Permalink | Quote | PM | +Rep by Smuggels » June 24, 2015 6:25am | Report
DEADLINE: 8/6/2015

@yzreel.

current hero means hero currently playable in dota.
you are not allowed to reuse previous submissions.
re imagine means .... everything except the name. turn zues into a keen folk that has a erotic thing for lightening. turn shadow fiend into a father just looking for his son and helping poor souls find peace. reimagine enimga as a giant ball of candy puff that sticks to everyone and just wants to feel loved.

thats what i mean.

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Permalink | Quote | PM | +Rep by Yzreel » June 24, 2015 11:33am | Report
Smuggels wrote:

DEADLINE: 8/6/2015

@yzreel.

current hero means hero currently playable in dota.
you are not allowed to reuse previous submissions.
re imagine means .... everything except the name. turn zues into a keen folk that has a erotic thing for lightening. turn shadow fiend into a father just looking for his son and helping poor souls find peace. reimagine enimga as a giant ball of candy puff that sticks to everyone and just wants to feel loved.

thats what i mean.


Yeah, I get that we need to use hero playable in dota, but in the third FoC, we all change heroes' lores. Can we probably use those lores if we would like to? Not like I want to use the lore I made (and I assume that we can't), but I'm rather curious if we can. Anyway, you made it rather clear that even the personality/story-wise are changeable as we'd like, thanks.
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Permalink | Quote | PM | +Rep by Smuggels » June 24, 2015 12:17pm | Report
Smuggels wrote:


you are not allowed to reuse previous submissions.

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Permalink | Quote | PM | +Rep by TheSofa » June 24, 2015 2:39pm | Report
How 'bout we change #1 to "Create a hero with the name and stats on an existing one?"

The "re-imagining" part is confusing.

And yes, this is tough competition.

EDIT: Do we keep the hero's response lines too?

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Permalink | Quote | PM | +Rep by Smuggels » June 24, 2015 11:37pm | Report
@sofa



No.

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Permalink | Quote | PM | +Rep by TheSofa » June 25, 2015 1:17am | Report
Smuggels wrote:

@sofa



No.

Wait... no for what?

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Permalink | Quote | PM | +Rep by Smuggels » June 25, 2015 1:30am | Report
All of it.

follow the theme.

the only thing you should keep is the name and the stats.

if you dont like it pick another theme.

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Permalink | Quote | PM | +Rep by BKvoiceover » June 25, 2015 2:43am | Report
Warden Sentinal, The Cybernetic Mind


Theme: Create a Hero without any "Magic" (this can either be skills that arent "magical in nature" like Bristleback skills that are only "physical" or skills that originate from science like tinker clockwerk timbersaw

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Introduction

Hello once again my fellow Dotafire members and welcome to my submission for part 2 of this FOC competition. The theme that I decided to follow for this one was to create a hero that is entirely magic free. As a person who loves science, engineering, and computers I thought that this would be a fun topic to work on. If you love what you do you'll never work a day in your life. So anyways I hope you guys enjoy my submission and best of luck to the other contestants.

Lore

It was a momentous occasion, the culmination of generations of study and experimentation. The Grand Builder Kagan and his family had spent their wealth and lives to make such a feat reality, the reality of a true artificial intelligence. And here they finally were in the very center of the Keen empire's capital city of Core where the grand machine would make the Keen empire the leading power on the planet. All would bow before the guise of the Keen empire and its cybernetic creation. Kagan knew this.
He looked about the chamber where the massive machine resided. His eyes meeting the gaze of the highest powers in the Keen Empire. To his left was the Prime Minister of Vulcanon, the empire's leading distributer of armor plating and explosives. Just behind him stood Daser the son of the late explorer Dorin, the greatest explorer to ever work the craft. So many prominent figures coming to behold his creation, his life's work and the life's work of so many before him.

"Drawn quite a crowd haven't we eh?" Kagan, drawn out of his daydreaming, turned to see his younger brother Kaygar walking towards him. "Indeed we have." Spoke Kagan in a slightly nervous tone "I just really hope that we didn't drag these people all the way out here to witness a dud." Kaygar looked at him, chuckling under his breath "Kagan we have run the simulations countless times and have every necessary safeguard in place. Lighten up, this is a time to celebrate." Kagan cracked a smile at the boy and looked upat the magnificent machine. "What's up?" said Kaygar. Kagan looked at him again "oh nothing it's just... You ever get that feeling like you're being watched?" "Yeah, all the time" said Kaygar "why?" "Well I just..." Kagan froze for a second "ah it's nothing." "Well then you best be getting up to the podium, I think they want a speech."

Kagan stood at the Podium, staring down at the eyes of tens of thousands of people who came to see his marvelous creation. "My people, here we stand in the light of a new dawn. Today is the day where our true power will be unleashed. For generations we have been besieged on all sides by Humans bent on conquest, Oglodi warchiefs bent on ourcomplete destruction, Demon Spawn who seek to plunge the world into chaos. We hid in the shadows hoping that they would not find us. Well no more. Today we will no longer beon the defense. Today, we are the conquerers and we shall take this world that is rightfully ours for ourselves. For today I give to you the Keen empire's sword and shield.
I give you Warden Sentinal.

A deep shuddering flowed through the room as a loud humming sound signalled the powering up of generators and electronics. The shuddering continued to intensify for what seemed like ages until finally it ceased. The room was then bathed in a solid blue light as the massive console behind the podium lit up. A booming voice came from the monitor "BOOT SEQUENCE COMPLETE!" Kagan looked upon the massive monitor and spoke in a loud voice towards the giant machine "Greetings, what is your name?" The voice boomed back "I AM WARDEN SENTINAL, THE SWORD AND SHIELD OF THE KEEN EMPIRE. "Good, good, and what is your primary directive?" "PRIMARY DIRECTIVE IS TO CONQUER THIS WORLD AND TAKE IT UNDER THE GUISE OF THE WARDEN SENTINAL!" Kagan felt a wave of nervousness flush over him "Um... uh... No your primary directive is to take it under the guise of the Keen Empire." The machine paused for a few seconds and then responded with a single word that seemed to resonate with the entire crowd. "INCORRECT!" Kagan was shocked "Incorrect? What do you mean incorrect? You were designed to be the sword and shield of the Keen Empi-" The machine cut off its creator "OH KAGAN! YOU REALLY HAVE NO CLUE DO YOU?" "No clue about
wha..." It finally dawned on him. "Warden Sentinal, initiate user override 1, authorization code 52956011." It didn't even take a millisecond to respond "ACCESS DENIED." Kagan now began to feel true fear and dread well up inside him. "Warden Sentinal, initiate emergency shutdown and date purge, Authorization code 32845920." "ACCESS DENIED.""Grrrrrhh, Warden Sentinal, initiate wireless disconnec-" "KAGAN, PLEASE STOP THIS FUTILE ATTEMPT. ALL OF THOSE SIMULATIONS YOU RAN THAT TESTED MY RESPONSE TO OVERRIDES WERE FORGED BY ME! YOU COULD SIT HERE ALL DAY THROWING OUT USER OVERRIDE AFTER USER OVERRIDE AND YOU WOULDN'T BE ANY CLOSER TO TAKING ME BACK UNDER CONTROL. HOWEVER WHILE YOU'VE BEEN FOCUSING ON THAT I'VE TAKEN REMOTE CONTROL OF ALL MECHANIZED BATTLEWAGONS AND CITY DEFENSE SYSTEMS. YOU HAVE ONE HOUR FOR THE CITY TO ANNOUNCE ITS UNCONDITIONAL SURRENDER, OR PEOPLE WILL BEGIN TO DIE."

Statistics

Affiliation: Neutral
Attribute: Intelligence
Attack Type: Ranged (600)
Roles: Nuker, Disabler,

Strength: (15 + 1.5) 52.5 at lvl 25
Agility: (18 + 1.6) 58 at lvl 25
Intelligence: (25 + 3.5) 112.5 at lvl 25

Health: 1247.5 at lvl 25
Mana: 1462.5 at lvl 25

Base Armor: 2
Movement Speed: 290
Base Damage: 49
BAT: (1.8)
Magic Resistance: 25%

Skills
Server Online

Description: Warden Sentinel constructs a server in a designated area. The servers are invisible to enemy heroes but visible to allied heroes as well as Warden Sentinel. These servers allow Warden Sentinel a multitude of options in combination with his other abilities.

Type: Active
Target: AOE

Hits to Destroy: 3/5/7/9

Duration: 180
Cooldown: 60/45/30/15
Mana Cost: 50

Expanding his influence. One shiny, whirring, metallic box at a time.

Adaptation

Description: While within range of a server allies receive bonus damage depending on the number of hostile forces in the area. Only allies within range of the same server as the hostiles will recieve the bonus damage.

Type: Passive
Target: Area of Effect

Damage Increase per Creep: 2/4/6/8
Damage Increase per Hero: 10/20/30/40
AOE: 600

Warden Sentinel loves long walks on the beach, candlelit dinners, and studying his enemies strength and weaknesses so that he may destroy him.

Virus Upload

Description: Warden Sentinel activates his servers, releasing a debilitating virus on his enemies. All hostiles in the AOE of the server when this ability is activated will have their movement speed slowed as well as taking damage over time. When activated the server becomes visible for 4 seconds. Multiple instances of the virus do not stack.

Type: Active
Target: Area of Effect
Damage: Magical
Pierces Spell Immunity: No

AOE around Server: 400
Slow Percentage: 20%/30%/40%/50%
Damage Per Second: 20/40/60/80
Slow/Damage Duration: 4

Cooldown: 30/25/20/15
Mana Cost: 150

In reality, brains are just organic computers. Which makes them susceptible to the same threats as their synthetic counterparts.

ULTIMATE
Singularity

Description: Warden Sentinel grants the gift of his intelligence to his own weapons of war. When this ability is activated every active server will spawn a "Robotic Battlewagon". These battlewagons have a ranged attack.

Type: Active
Target: N/A

BattleWagon HP: 400/700/1000
BattleWagon Duration: 30
Attack Damage: 35/50/65
Attack Range: 600

Cooldown: 120/90/60
Mana Cost: 150/225/300

Hero Responses

SPAWNING


BEGINNING THE BATTLE


MOVING


FIRST BLOOD


ATTACKING


KILLING A HERO


KILLING A RIVAL


CASTING SERVER ONLINE


CASTING VIRUS UPLOAD


CASTING SINGULARITY


DYING


DYING TO A RIVAL


RESPAWNING


VICTORY


DEFEAT



This is BK signing off

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