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Yzreel, God of Criticism

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Permalink | Quote | PM | +Rep by ThreadOfFate » June 24, 2014 9:56am | Report

IMPORTANT NOTE


Yes, I got bored whilst sick at home and decided to make this one for the hell of it. I have made one of three people I have gotten to know a little bit on Dotafire (plus myself). I will do one per thread, and the lore will be the same for each one. I hope nobody is offended by my ideas (Seriously, don't hurt me xD)

Yzreel, God of Criticism


Radiant Intelligence
Support/Disabler
Base strength: 20(+1.7)
Base agility: 22(+2.1)
Base intelligence: 24(+3.0)
Base armour: 1
Base damage: 57
Movespeed: 300

Lore


The magical connections between civilizations are managed by some of the most powerful entities in the world. There are four in total: Thread, Pory, Bunkan and Yzreel.

Thread is the innovator of the four, constantly improving connections and devising new methods of warfare.

Pory is the more patient of the four, often laying in wait for decades until the time is right to strike a powerful blow.

Bunkan is a mystery, constantly changing from serious to laid-back in an instant. If he is called to battle, however, he becomes a formidable opponent.

Yzreel is the teacher, evaluating and making changes to the other four's style of battle, and with good reason. The amount of battle experience he holds makes him perfect for the title.

Long ago, the four nations lived in harmony, but everything changed when the- Wait wrong script.

Long ago, the four gods watched over the galactic connection, protecting it with their very lives if needed. In order to do so, each deity often took turns going to the planet in order to prevent the discovery of their home.

Skills



Q: Negative feedback (target unit)

Even in the midst of combat, Yzreel cannot help but
point out the multiple flaws in someone's performance. Hearing
this sudden reprimanding, enemies are speechless to come up
with anything, silencing them for a duration, whilst slowing
for 10% as well.


Silence: 2/3/4/5
Cooldown: 18/17/16/15
Mana cost: 90/100/110/120

"The way you move is imbalanced! Tread lighter!"

W: Demonstration (Target unit)

Yzreel cannot take the imperfect performance of promising
abilities, and shows the user how it's really done, by
automatically using the target's last used move against them,
and adding an extra 100 damage to it. Cannot use ultimates.


Cooldown: 20/19/18/17
Mana cost: 150/140/130/120

"Ok, now you went wrong when you yelled 'ECHO SLAM' before actually doing it."

E: Commanding presence (passive)

The longer Yzreel spends near an enemy, the more
his evaluations drill into his opponent's mind. If an
enemy spends five seconds within a 500 AoE, they are
ministunned and take minor damage.


Ministun: 0.3/0.4/0.5/0.6
Damage: 20/30/40/50

"You think that's scary? Stand near Bunkan when he's annoyed."

R: Degrading. (Target unit)

Yzreel ranks his enemy's performance so low that
they are demoted, going back to whatever abilities and
and stats he had at the time, for a duration.


Level loss: 4/7/10
Duration: 4/5/6
Cooldown: 80/70/60
Mana cost: 250/200/150

"That was the worst attempt yet! TRY HARDER!"

NOTE FROM ThreadOfFate


Oh boy, no responses for this one. I normally don't put author notes like this, but I just wanted to reinforce the fact that this is for COMEDY PURPOSES ONLY! NO OFFENCE IS MEANT TO THE PERSONAGES DISPLAYED IN THESE GUIDES.

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Permalink | Quote | PM | +Rep by Bunkansee » June 24, 2014 10:00am | Report
This is amazing! So you're doing one for me too? Lol that will be funny.

Jokes aside skills are good! (and funny ;)

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Permalink | Quote | PM | +Rep by ThreadOfFate » June 24, 2014 10:03am | Report
Bunkansee wrote:

This is amazing! So you're doing one for me too? Lol that will be funny.

Jokes aside skills are good! (and funny ;)


BE AFRAID. BE VERY AFRAID.

Ty :P

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Permalink | Quote | PM | +Rep by Bunkansee » June 24, 2014 10:03am | Report
I'm shaking in my boots :s

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Permalink | Quote | PM | +Rep by porygon361 » June 24, 2014 10:04am | Report
LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOL


Love this so much hahaha :D

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Permalink | Quote | PM | +Rep by ThreadOfFate » June 24, 2014 10:05am | Report
Bunkansee wrote:

I'm shaking in my boots :s


>:) You should be (or, you would be if I could figure out what skills you would have xD. WIP)

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porygon361 wrote:

LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOL


Love this so much hahaha :D


As stated to Bunkansee, be afraid >;3

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Permalink | Quote | PM | +Rep by Bunkansee » June 24, 2014 10:06am | Report
How about Q: incorrect spelling (Because I cannot spell to save my life/just plain bad at using a keyboard)

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Permalink | Quote | PM | +Rep by ThreadOfFate » June 24, 2014 10:11am | Report
Bunkansee wrote:

How about Q: incorrect spelling (Because I cannot spell to save my life/just plain bad at using a keyboard)

Here's a taster then.

Q: Incorrect spelling (Active, AoE)

Bunkan purposefully spells or pronounces his opponent's
name, making them stop in their tracks trying to process what he
said. The enemy units within the AoE at the time take damage
and a stun


Damage: 50/75/100/125
Stun: 1.2/1.4/1.6/1.8
AoE: 200/300/400/500
Cooldown: 15
Mana cost: 100

"So that's pronounced Windraynguh, right?"

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Permalink | Quote | PM | +Rep by Bunkansee » June 24, 2014 10:13am | Report
Haha! Sounds great :)

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