Thaedin, Knight Captain

Thaedin, Knight Captain
HP 587
MP 260
BAT 1.7
MS 310
HP Regen 0.75
MP Regen 0.25
Armor 3
Damage 63-69
STR 23 + 2.4
*AGI 24 + 2.9
INT 20 + 1.95

Skyfall Leap
Leaps to an area stunning enemies on a 275 AOE.
0.75/1.25/1.75/2.25 sec Stun
600/800/1000/1200 Cast Range
21/19/17/15 sec CD
140 Mana
*Invulnerable while leaping

Reflective Armor
Gives 17% Chance to block and reflect the damage to the source.
25/50/75/100% of the damage is blocked and reflected
*Returns as Pure Damage after reductions
*Damage goes through magic immunity

Mace Strike
Gives a chance on attack to stun an enemy for 0.6 seconds.
10/20/30/40% Chance on attack
15/30/45/60 Bonus Damage
*Deals Physical Damage

Shield of the Captain
Gives 100% Resistance to damage, stun, slow, silence, disarm, doom, pause, or any debuff for a short period of time.
1.5/2.75/4 seconds
240/200/160 sec CD
100/150/200 Mana

I can't really imagine this 'Knight Captain' leaping, so i think the that ability should be replaced else... I thought maybe instead of Skyfall Leap:

Champion's Blow
Thaedin smashes his mace into the ground, created a powerful wave of light that surges forward in a straight line. The first enemy it hits is stunned, and Thaedin dashes forward to the target and deals a crushing blow.
Target Point
1/1.5/2/2.5 sec Stun
600/800/1000/1200 Cast Range
40% speed increase during Dash
20/40/60/80 Bonus Damage on first hit
18/15/12/9 sec CD
140 Mana
*Magic Immune while Dashing
*Dashing is broken by any other action, and the speed bonus is lost instantly if cancelled.
*Bonus Damage is pure damage
Thaedin's Powerful Mace glows with a holy light, heavenly powers contained within

He charges very fast then smashes his mace on the ground. Like faceless void using time walk.

Not really, Faceless void uses a Pseudo-Blink that can travel through walls and terrain at a fixed speed. This is a skill-shot/target point ability that, if an enemy is hit, makes Thaedin dash - essentially, target that unit automatically and give a move-speed bonus and first hit attack bonus, unless you give him a command to do otherwise.

If we use your simple terminology, he smashes his mace first, then, unlike void, runs, around terrain, to the target. Void blinks to an area, not an enemy, and the only thing that happens with his mace is he then presumably auto-attacks that target, or Chronospheres.

I like your idea, a sort of carry version of Omni-knight, but don't think the Leap works. When i suggest something that would make more sense, and actually be something unique that doesn't happen in the game already, don't try and slag it off in an attempt to be sarcastic, just because you are annoyed or 'like yours better'.